Howdy Nige...I ma sure glad you like Blake, but don't tell his wife! [Linked Image] sorry..couldn't resist. I may switch that can/sometimes thing. I am so glad you think this one has potential. To answer your question, yes, that last line is a stand alone line. Can be repeated as much as a composer or singer feels it should be.

If you note my comemnts to Judy (above) I am working on using more imperfect rhymes these days which is why some of these line rhymes may sound a bit different. In the first line of V2, I am using "up" and "thought" as the rhyme.

I really like your ideas for that second climb. Am gonna add them to the consideration pile.

Thanks SO much for the time and thought you put into this.

Bobbie

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