ok...a few thoughts

first..we definitely want the girl grabbing the guys ass rather than the other way around
I love it when my wife grabs my tired old butt !

I'd change delightful to great or good or something..delightful is hard to sing

The Things that really matter
Aren't always what you see
They're not always on the surface
But somewhere underneath

I'd put something in there about the size of peoples dreams

Some people have small dreams
Some people have big dreams
Small dreams are good dreams too
It's great when either size comes true

I dunno...whaddya think

Bob Young