Hi Bobbie
Don,t find any time letely...been real busy.
Anyway... This one looks real good
A few lines I might change

First line in Lyric
All my systems were in low, needed somewhere to reload

1st climb
What a thoughtful thing to say, to start off my day( seems to be a lyric about thoughts)

2nd verse..last two lines
The waitress stood back, from the courtesy he lacked
As he talked to her like a block of wood

food for thought/keep or sweep
Allen