Thanks SO much for coming back on this one, Tink. You always have such good ideas for me and this is no exception. I know I have to keep working on that chorus. It needs to be the strongest part of the song, not a letdown.

On that second verse...I started with the idea that these two seemed out of place...but that didn't seem to work into the line about having little between them to say either. So I think it may be back to the drawing board a bit there. On that first line, I really want to retain the fact that this has made the singer think about things. Still pondering on that curt line myself. I like your alternative a lot there.

I think a lot of us aspire to be like the folks in that last verse. That is the essential nature of what this artist wants in this song. I just hope she is pleased with the final product. I will post the good news when I am more sure of the bottom line..but there IS great news coming!!

Thanks for always being on the team!! Your ideas are always helpful.

Bobbie

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