Howdy Blake,

Glad you enjoyed this one. Actually, the hook is in the chorus twice..at both the beginning and end, so with 3 repeats, it gets in there 6 times, which may be sufficient. It could also be repeated at the end as a tag if the producer/composer feels it is needed.

As far as the curt thing...soem folks just have that demeanor about them. They are abrupt in their manner of speech. In this case I didn't think what he was curt about or misunderstood was all that relevant to give it anymore detail..but will reconsider if that is bothering folks. I just had to cut out a lot of non-essential details here. The singer was listening to the exchange of words and simply felt the guy was at fault for whatever happened.

This story actually came from the singer's husband over dinner the other night. Never tried to write a specific song for someone else before. It was interesting to try it.

Thanks again.
Bobbie

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