Howdy Wy...You are right..shabby is outta there. I want to work on that chorus some more. It doesn't quite sit right for me either. Ideas sure appreciated. I think I see the rhyme things you are talking about but that kinda stuff doesn't concern me much. Don't think it really throws anything off, as long as you can still hear the rhymes that are supposed to be there. I hope so anyway. Thanks SO much for looking this over for me. Any further thoughts gratefully accepted.

Bobbie


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