Hi Bobbie

I’m glad you had a great time at the symposium, I’m really looking forward to seeing your report.

I must admit I’m not convinced about this lyric, but I do appreciate that it was produced quickly and under unusual conditions. I think the hook is good “You’re so cold it burns me" and there is some clever use of the cold/hot theme. On the negative side the chorus seems to lose focus from “I don’t feel ashamed” and I think there is a general problem with lack of feeling, for example “just going through the motions” is a bit weak.

On the whole, for a couple of hours work with two strangers this is pretty good going, and keeping all three parties sufficiently involved is a feat in itself.

Cheers

Nige [Linked Image]

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