I stand by that statement, Tink. it's not much. weak hook, story, imagery and wordplay. not to mention some awkward lines. if you've got a great melody, fine. well maybe. without my posts stirring the stew, this thread would've died. there's not much about the lyric to comment on, which was my intial point.

Jean, Bobbie brought the workshop into the discussion. that made it fair play. intrapersonal, interpersonal...those're just fad words that mean very little to me. esp since I've said time and again that I've learned and continue to learn from others. I just learn from their work and experiences in books and records. if such things were discussed on this forum, I'd learn from them here, too. and i've also said that if folks are impressed with the fruit of those workshops, by all means they should take part.

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Nashville demos etc:

https://www.soundclick.com/bands3/default.cfm?bandID=431939

other demos:

https://soundcloud.com/wabash-cannibal

Amazon Kindle books by Robert George you may enjoy:

1) Americana

2) Teenage Graceland

3) The Will to Be

4) Fort Mystery

5) Wheel Sea

6) My One True Love