Hi Michael,

Sure appreciate you stopping in with your insights. [Linked Image] As I said in my preface, there are still things I would want to change in this, but as it was the result of a timed exercise, I don't want to change something without the consent of my cowriters at this point. But perfect? Not hardly! It was merely something I have never done before, writing a complete song, music AND lyrics during one rather brief session. We had fun, and all of us felt the end product was at least acceptable to us. One of the nice parts of this workshop was the seeming lack of dismissive judgements on the part of pros and participants alike. The general attitude was one of "how can we make improvements" and even the pro critiques were aimed at helping us fix any problems they heard or observed. It was a lot like the general attitude on this board. Few of us are critical simply for the sake of poking holes in someone else's work, but rather in helping each other improve what we have. I do try to learn from everyone..and at this seminar it was easy to do.
Thanks again,
Bobbie

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