Hi Bobbie, How do you generate so much controversy?. Must be an accident. <g>
Well I'm just going to critique the lyric and stay out of the rest other than to say you 3 did pretty good. Did one of those once. To me it's more of an experience than any expectation of turning out a chart song.

Agree the last line before the c could lead in better but dont see that it needs and more cold references.
Mainly. I have trouble with the last half of the c. Don't care for the "froze" line especially. Seems the "cold part has been covered plenty. The "quit tryin' line could be misleading as to whether the singer is saying the singee quit trying or if they're "telling" them to quit trying.
"Ashamed" --been no reference to any reason why they "should' feel ashamed. anyway --poss rewrite last part of c just to look at

I didn't cause the pain
I won't take the blame
For lies you told
You quit tryin'
Now my fire os dyin' , you're so cold

Pretty hard to do much changing on real short lines without changing melody. Seems you need another word in next to last line. Looks like you could do without "and" in last line and maybe slip a note from last to next to last line

Pretty good lyric under the circumstances,Doesnt seem like the hook-title's been overdone