Howdy Harriet,

If you check out the structure of the two halves of that first verse, the first half has the fire in line 3. The second half has the icy indifference in line 3. Not sure we want to add a second reference to that last line. We will certainly consider all suggestions, however. Nothing is ever cast in stone. [Linked Image] Thanks for dropping by with your always welcome insights!

Bobbie


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