Howdy Ricki,

Thanks for dropping by. The line you suggested was exactly what I had started with in the lyric..and I let the guys go with what they wanted. I was trying not to sabotage the exercise by obstructing progress, ya know. [Linked Image] The chorus actually is very smooth with the music. I'm not sure I understand the question regarding who did the freezing here, but the way it sings, I thoought it was clear that whoever is not singing it is the one who stopped trying. Wouldn't make any sense any other way IMO. You are SO right...that writing under a tight deadline, in the same room with two people you do not know..who are more musicians than lyricists is a very interesting experience. It was very rewarding just to be able to complete a song. There is always time for polishing any rough edges. It was fun..and I also learned a lot from just doing it this way. Thanks so much!

Bobbie

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