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by JAPOV - 05/01/26 04:06 PM
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For Dom
by JAPOV - 04/30/26 09:52 PM
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Not bad John. I would polish it a bit. What do you think about this?
In from Houston comes a feeling saying I owe apology
Some wouldn’t care at all, but now you’re asking it of me
I’m not all that bad, so here’s my answer, what it’s worth
Coming down to Texas from the Great White Northern earth
This could be used as a verse, probably V2 in a V1-V1-Pre-chorus-chorus-V3 ... structure.
Alternatively, in a slightly modified form it could be used as an outro:
[Outro]
In from Houston comes a feeling saying I owe apology
Some wouldn’t care at all, but now you’re asking it of me
I’m not all that bad, so here’s my answer, what it’s worth
From the Great White North to Texas…
We’re just all bad together
Whoa, we’re just all bad together
I like the outro idea better because I think Suno could nail it. But honestly, Marty is pretty pissed. I would prefer not mentioning him in this song. I'll leave it up to you because it's based on your song idea.
Last edited by Rob B.; Yesterday at 10:16 PM.
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