So I am listening and listening to this to get a vision of where I want to go with this and the story I wanted to tell

Reap what you sow was self evident I think, and Pay For it about how the little guy always gets hosed by big business, the elites and their governments.

Marty this incorporates a lot of what you are saying about discord ...and devolvement....but the message is that this does not make us all bad.

Tony is smart and funny and talented but can be caustic as his emotion gets the better of him.

I think Dom takes things too personally at times which makes him lash out but he makes good points above and from what I have heard he has created some good music...apart from those long Udio induced intros Dom wink

Stepping back from this, our scenario can be applied on a larger scale to the us vs them polarization out there

So that is where this is going I think....


If writing ever becomes work I think I'm going to have to stop