Dang no Rob I went right into the lyric...love the production and the hook turns out catchy ...definitely stands on its own

but i'm thinking different direction musically...don't know how to prompt it

Chorus in my mind has a Lost Together by Blue Rodeo feel but sped up to more . count 12345678 stressing the three

Re rhyme scheme....definitely sings and rhymes and works in my head ....maybe because I am slower and


If writing ever becomes work I think I'm going to have to stop