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Nice. I like it. The rhyme scheme of the verses are different. I would make them identical. If you listen to the song you'll notice the line "We are all not all bad" comes out pretty good. That was the reason I repeated that line. Did you listen to the song? Should the music go in a different direction?
I liked this:
[Pre-chorus]
Every post a new disaster, every thread a little war
Still we keep on coming back here, always asking just for more
Shouldn't it read: Mixed up gestalt ?
Last edited by Rob B.; 49 minutes ago.
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