Hey Marty,

I'm only able to listen to the recent alternate version from your SUNO link as I do not have a Soundcloud account.

It's an interesting concept you got here but there's a whole lot of words. If you can trim it down a little I believe it will flow a bit smoother and not seem so "rushed" to cram it all in.
If you can provide the SUNO link for the other renditions I'll give those a listen as well. :-)

Peace,

Dave


"Where there's a Gill, there's a way"