Hey Marty,

I like the idea of this. I understand where you're going with it but I still feel like the singer is rushed to say all the lyrics. With that, here's a thought I had. Just a thought only.


[V1]
The dog is barkin' at the door. Your voice is gnawing at my brain
Just like him you won't shut up and hun it's drivin' me insane
you try like hell to tell me how my world is gonna be
But there’s a storm inside here brewin' that you're too damn blind to see
This love ain't big enough for us, you know what I’m talkin' bout
So I'll bring the dog inside and put your sorry, stank-ass out.

[CH]
Time to break free of this jail. I've paid enough to cover bail
You may have bought the dog but babe my heart is not for sale
If your love is like the rain my soul is dying from the drought.
So I'll bring the dog inside and put your loser, stank-ass out


[V2]
I ain't close to perfect. I'm no angel or girl scout.
But I deserve much better than the crap you're spewin' out
I heard you tell your friends just how my world is gonna be
perhaps your ex will take you back. I guess there's just one way to see
Don’t try and play all innocent. You know what I’m talkin' bout.
I'm gonna bring the dog inside and then I'll put your stank-ass out

[CH]
Time to break free of this jail. I've paid enough to cover bail
I’ve had second thoughts before but now this ship is gonna sail.
I’ve heard enough of all your bitchin'. Go ahead boy. scream and shout.
But the dog is coming in and you can walk your stank-ass out


[instrumental solo]

[CH]
Time to break free of this jail. I've paid enough to cover bail
I've given in before but man this time I will not fail
You'll never understand, boy, what true love is all about
The dog stays here with me. Get your sorry, stank-ass out.


As always, KOS.


Peace,

Dave


"Where there's a Gill, there's a way"