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TV Drama
by Raymond Byabazaire - 09/18/26 05:01 AM
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Syd
by Gary E. Andrews - 09/17/26 09:40 PM
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Lagoons
by Gary E. Andrews - 09/17/26 01:34 AM
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Söndörgő
by Gary E. Andrews - 09/17/26 12:01 AM
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Bayside
by Gary E. Andrews - 09/16/26 01:51 AM
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Diverge
by Michael W. Brown - 09/14/26 03:50 PM
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https://soundclick.com/track/15327692Snow Storm In July [Verse] It was the middle of July, ninety-five degrees Cicadas singing in the sycamore trees We were laughing underneath the porch light Talking about places we'd like to go You said you'd never been to a Razorback game I said I'd get us tickets on the fifty-yard line [Pre-Chorus] Then you looked at me with those goodbye eyes And I swear I saw snow falling from the sky [Chorus] It was like a snow storm in July Ice on the ground, tiers in your eyes Middle of summer, but baby, somehow The whole world turned cold when you said goodbye There wasn't a cloud in that blue Arkansas sky But I watched my whole life freeze that night When I saw winter in your eyes Like a snow storm in July [Verse] I drove to our spot out past Sugarloaf Mountain Thinking 'bout the promises we made back then Saw our names carved underneath that old cedar Still holding on though we aren't anymore Our song came softly through the radio Before I realized it, I reached out for you [Pre-Chorus] Then I looked up at that summer moon And every white flake looked like losing you [Chorus] It was like a snow storm in July Ice on the ground, tiers in your eyes Middle of summer, but baby, somehow The whole world turned cold when you said goodbye There wasn't a cloud in that blue Arkansas sky But I watched my whole life freeze that night When I saw winter in your eyes Like a snow storm in July [Bridge] Now every summer when the heat rolls in I think about that night again Sometimes I wonder if you ever think of me Or if you ever miss the life we never got to know [Final Pre-Chorus] And sometimes I still see those goodbye eyes But these days I don't see snow falling from the sky [Final Chorus] It was like a snow storm in July Ice on the ground, tiers in my eyes Middle of summer, but baby, somehow The whole world turned cold when you said goodbye There wasn't a cloud in that blue Arkansas sky Still, everything froze that hot July night Now every summer brings me back To that strangely frozen night--- When love turned cold As a snow storm... In July [Outro] Yeah, the sun still shines on this old town But some nights I still feel that snow coming down
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This came out very nice. Good writing. The song feels a little bloated and could be trimmed down some but yeah, this ones looking and sounding good.
Write on, Man, Michael W. Brown, f.k.a. "bluesriff"
"The best way to find yourself is to lose yourself in the service of others." Mahatma Gandhi
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This came out very nice. Good writing. The song feels a little bloated and could be trimmed down some but yeah, this ones looking and sounding good. Thanks Michael, for the listen and your reply. Yes this did come out a bit longer than I wanted, but I'm happy with it.
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