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by bennash - 06/07/26 09:34 PM
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Joined: Dec 2006
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Hey Kimberly, That's a fun summer song. Thoughts ? I think you could refer to both Jennie and the car as "Honey Bee". eg Me and my Honey Bee in My Honey Bee The double entendre can be somtimes cliched, but here I think it would work in this context. It would be obvious when you're referring to the person, and obvious when you're referring to the car. Introduce the car, then introduce the person of the same name. "Jennie" annoys me, she's coming between a man and his car.  Anyways, I thinks it's a song worth working on. It's fun and quirky and has a good feel. cheers, niteshift Ps - the word "heart" needs to be "heartbeat' to meter properly.
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