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Florida
by bennash - 06/07/26 09:34 PM
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Hi Kim, I'm not sure why this hasn't had any comments I really like it. I love this guys voice I think it's perfect for this song! The 1st thing that came to me about this song is the title. I think it's a cool title BUT that would make the singer my age or maybe a little older, lol. I don't think that's a good idea. I've been taught that image is so important and no one wants to sound old so I suggest changing the title to something that would make them no older than in their 30's. The next thing is musical. I think the chorus sounds very much like the verses. I was also told that to use the hook more than 2 times in the chorus is over using it. I was told that by Craig Bickhard and I'm not saying he's right just sharing info. I think I would change her name too I'm not sure but I think that name's been used in a lot of songs and it kinda dates to song to me too.  I like that the bridge brings it up to date. I know that the music is different but I think if it was just a little more different that might be better. I hope I was a little help. I think you’re working on a very commercial song and with that thought MAYBE (I could be wrong) if it was a tad faster if might be more pitchable. Dottie
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