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Florida
by bennash - 06/07/26 09:34 PM
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Joined: Nov 2008
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Hi guys, this is one I wrote about a year or more ago, for a challenge to write about a car.  I remembered one from my teenage years, and used that, thus Honeybee B210, which was made by Datsun. I finally found a co-writer/singer/musician in Chris Woods from SongU. It is stillin it's working stage, but we hope we are honing in on it. How is it? I want honesty please, but be gentle..hehehe  We would greatly appreciate any comments and/or suggestions for this one. Thanks!  ** I already see that SWEET  is perhaps used too often in verse one, and would love alternatives, if you have any ideas you would like to offer up~~ EDIT--in process of re-write so I have taken down the link..thanks so much guys for your suggestions!!  Her daddy woulda met me with a shot gun, if he'd knew ‘bout me and Jennie’s kinda fun in my yellow Datsun, black stripe down ‘er side Lord, have mercy, that was a sweet, sweet ride we'd buzz off for some burgers and fries tires hitting the curb and a tease from her sweet blue eyes sweet blue eyes Chorus Honey Bee Honey Bee the ride that meant the world to me I've never felt so wild and free Like we did back then in my Honey Bee Man, that girl was good to me When I took my Jennie for a spin in my little Honey Bee, a B210 Parking at the lake behind Carter's Barn cooler in the back of that hatchback car suntan legs hanging off the dock skinny dipping and sipping on Rolling Rock Soaking wet hair matted ‘round her freckled face that girl did it for me, made my heart race Oh yeah Repeat Chorus Bridge Carter's barn’s fallen down now but Jennie and I are still around and when the moods right on a moon lit night I take my Jennie for a midnight spin again and again... Repeat Chorus © Kimberly Hales Kime/Chris Woods
Last edited by Kimberlyinnc; 02/16/12 07:04 PM.
*Always open to collaborations on my lyrics.. with singers and musicians, but PLEASE contact me before putting work into one--in case someone else has it..thanks!!** BMI Member All Rights Reserved http://www.littleikepublishing.com Email for Song Business Only littleikeproductions@hotmail.com
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