Hey Girl,

I've been meaning to check this one out, and I'm sure glad I did. The hook is fabulous, the lyrics back it up from beginning to end, and you're zoning in on a huge market. You should be very proud of your writing here Michelle!

What's especially engaging about the story is that it isn't another "poor me, my man done up and left me" song; rather, it's showing how she's pullin' herself up by her bootstraps, makin' do, and movin' on.

Personally, I think the vocalist is fine and I love the harmonies -- she really conveys that sense of feistiness!

Alas, I'm going to have to concur about the music. I hate to use the word "hokey" eek, but at least for me it did take away from the song some. Having said that, I do believe that "niche market" is looking for a song to relate to lyrically and with a catchy beat, and to that degree, I think the demo would work fine. smile

So good luck, and let us know how it goes!!

Have a great day!
Beth

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