Michelle -

I think this is a great song. It's fun & clever, yet still has an emotional impact when you really stop and think about what it's saying. I completely agree that this is under-produced musically, but I don't think that will hurt your chances of getting it cut. (Yeah, I think you should have gotten more for your demo money, but the vocals more than make up for it.)

Let us know when you get the deal. Just a matter of time now. smile

- JP