Hi Michelle

I'm sure that it's a thrill to send off your lyrics and recorded melody and receive back a demo like this - even though you know there can be improvements - I don't see any real reason to not pitch the song as is. You've spent your money so get a little milage from it. You can always get another one done at a later date. Best wishes and good luck with it.

jm


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