Michelle, I've listened to this a couple of times - and I'm so glad Kevin got here before me.

I love the lyrics, the vocals, and the harmonies. The music, however, seems almost minimalist and bland. It's what I thought when I listened the first time but figured maybe I was being too picky (especially not being a musician myself). Kevin's observations though ring true. There's no passion or punch in the music. (Unless this was just to serve as a rough pre-demo to be polished later with more instruments and pizzazz.)

The song has - I think - tremendous potential. Just the hook/title "Single Mommy U" is wonderful. wink You're on the way. Just need the music to match. wink

Donna


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