Hi Magne.
Thanks for listening and commenting.I appreciate your suggestions and will take them into consideration if I do indeed decide to do another demo with this song.I really do want to make a good impression and I know that first impressions count the most,so i'm still unsure what to do.Many have said to send it as it is right now,and others feel as you do.....I'm thinking send it in now,but be prepared to have another demo made if it isnt picked up...still that first impression thing concerns me a great deal.......
Michelle


*****You know I'm a dreamer,but my heart's of gold*****Motley Crue