Michelle.

Now that's definately my kind of music, love that song and the style it was done in. Congrats on a great one!

To me,( and that's just my opinion) The lyrics told an exceptional story and the style that it was done in was both powerful and popular in todays music.

To me, for you to pitch this, you need great vocals, style & rhythm and you have that! The music, I don't want to say it doesn't matter because it does, but what you got on the demo is enough to show the song for what it is and realize what it could be. I think you could pitch this as is and it's a great demo.

I'd go for it girl!

A great musician would hear this for what it could be and give it that powerful sound it deserves. They would be able to just play this and hear it's potential in their head, they're good at it.

Best of luck with this,

Geneva