Hi Beth,
I am happy that you finally got a chance to listen and I appreciate your comments very much.I truly hope that you are right(you and the others that share in your opinion)because I think that I am going to take your advice and try submitting this song as it is right now,and see what happens.The vocalist did do a wonderful job.Hopefully that will help in"selling" the song and make up for the things you feel are lacking musically.Thanks so much for listening.
Michelle


*****You know I'm a dreamer,but my heart's of gold*****Motley Crue