Thanks Lucian for giving it another listen, I really do appreciate it. Guilty as charged re the lyrics, there are some minor changes that were made when I came to sing the song and I just sang whatever came into my head although the basic idea was there. I type the lyrics to songs in about 10 minutes usually and that is normally all it needs. I'm not really quite sure what the song is about but I had a sense that I was floating between this world and the next in a strange kind of way and I don't even do drugs or anything. Maybe I should, God knows what I would come up with. The point you make about cohesion I see very clearly and is evident by the time I took to piece all this together, a couple of days ago it was a right mess of ideas and key changes, the discarded parts in Cubase are still there are there are many that was intended for the song but will make another song anyway.

I am genuinely pleased you like it, it is probably the best song I have ever written, time will tell.

Regards

Dude

PS I have edited the lyrics to truly represent what is in the actual song

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