Hmm, Mark, the 2nd version is a lot crisper overall, but the drums were too busy for the song's ambiance, and that synth bit around 2.30 was just horrible, it was better how it was before at that part, with just that kind of Native American sounding chord sequence. On the first "secrets" there a lot of sibilance, probably best to red-do it.

I'm in the niteshift camp of perfectionism, when you get a good one, it's best to spend the time getting it just right.

Lucian