I came back for some more listens of this as well, Mark, and this really is a very, very good song! The stuff I've heard of yours before has often been very technically good, innovative but sometimes lacking cohesion, but this one puts the co in hesion! The lyrics you've got above are quite different from the actual song, and on the actual song they're much better and you've pretty much nailed that part of it.

The whole song gives me the sense of a someone escaping life through some kind of substance, and going to wonderful places in their mind, these meadows with crooked spires, where they can be the person they feel they really are.

Great stuff!

Lucian