http://soundclick.com/share?songid=7840182

The wait is over, my edited version is now available.

Things I have done:

Full drum edit and remix
Added some brass as suggested
Removed some amount of reverb especially on guitar solo
Quietened the synth pad
reduced mix amount of added guitar to the end of solo playing in 5ths
Reduced spaciness on solo a tad
Not touched the vocals, I don't think I can improve them anyway if I sang it a million times.

Anyway, many thanks indeed for all your wonderful comments without which I would not be as inspired to write and improve my recording and writing technique, I have learned an aweful lot since I came on this forum and hopefully put it to good use.

I hope you enjoy my new version

Regards

Mark

http://markcockerill.webs.com