Mark,

This is damned good! As I listened, I was captivated by the music. The lyric equalled the feel. When a song moves me that much, I don't find it necessary to do a tech critique. Who cares if you could add a tom here or a hi-hat there?! I don't. The songs holds its own as is. When I'm thoroughly captured by music, as I was with this song, it's fine as is. Just grab my emotions and move me, is all I ask in a song...and you did. No nits or suggestions. Well, one suggestion...and that is, everyone here out to listen to this. But, that's for all of them, not you. Super job! Great guitar outro!!!!

Alan

Last edited by Al David; 07/21/09 07:20 AM.