I don't have speakers so I can't listen, which is just as well since I haven't a musical bone in my body.

I don't really know what to make of the lyric though. Are they playing an obscure card game in the desert?

The language strikes me as somewhat stilted, so "friggin' ace" seems out of place.

I can't figure out if this is about a jilted lover or maybe some guy who has been a whipping boy for the person the singer is directing barbs too, as he gives him his eventual come-uppance.

Certainly interesting, if too obscured in its metaphorical content for me to follow well.

EDIT I got to listen this morning. I like the melody. A professional rendering should be especially nice.

Last edited by Frank N Furter; 01/17/09 04:01 PM.