Hey Ande,

Yep, Great tune.

I vote for the second version definately. They both sound like boy-band singers to me. (That's a good thing). But the first version sounds like a cross between Pop/R&B and Country. Mixing generes isn't something record companies generally like to do I imagine (No great experience).

If you do redemo it, you might consider REALLY doing a full fledged country demo.

Another problem with the country-ish demo was that it sounds like a slow song. They say uptempos are MUCH easier to pitch. The more of a medium tempo groove you give a country demo, the easier it would be to sell, I imagine.

Best of luck. Hope you get this recorded.

Peace,

Ian

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