Originally Posted by JAPOV
Originally Posted by Fdemetrio


We are entertaining ourselves, mostly. which is why so many different topics come up.

But if the reward is having written a good song and have a recording of it. Isnt it sweeter if its really good?


OK FD, here's your challenge... You, Marty, MAB... anybody, put your heads together and decide if there's anything at all redeemable about this song. Even if it needs to be completely re-written and re-vamped I'll do it, just tell me how to make it a hit smile




Tony

Beyond VCVCBC, I wouldnt know what to tell you. I could suggest how to re-write the song so that I might like it better...but that is nothing to rely on if you wanted to insure "hit" quality.

If you would like Marty to tell you how Marty would write it. Well then, Marty is competent to do that and will. wink

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