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Holly
by Ken Randall - 12/01/25 02:21 AM
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https://suno.com/s/0xmnC11NhUB1FWA8I'm wading through this muddy creek barefoot with my radio wind is warm, water's cold the song is just a echo The sun is hanging on to the sky and I'm trying not to cry ********* CHORUS>> Cus that's where you were the last time I saw you and that's where I want you to be right now How do I learn, to live without you? when everywhere I turn that's where you were ********* I'm sitting on my ol back porch fireflies are dancing doing just what they do best tryin to find romance and the sun is trying to say good-nite and I'm wishing I could fly... CHORUS Bridge>> I know that you won't come back I'm dreamin but it's just that feelin that you're still here.... The daffodils are in the yard right where you planted them I added tulips late this fall and took a chance that the sun would keep them alive and somehow we'd both survive cus THAT'S WHERE YOU WERE the last time I saw you and that's where I want you to be right now..... ***************Again this is my melody and lyrics from a work tape. Here's the work tape. https://soundclick.com/song/14179009
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Yeah I like your work tape , Go track it in a studio. I'm not going to bother with suno
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We’re all built from the same dust and dreams,
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Send me a check and I will. Thanks
You still didn't tell me what you thought of the song. Which is what this damn forum is about........... right????
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[quote=Kay-lynn Carew]Send me a check and I will. Thanks
You still didn't tell me what you thought of the song. Which is what this damn forum is about........... right????[/quot
I listened I like it , Could sound great tracked out , I was going to ask you for $1000.00. Charity for the elderly
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Ok apparently you don't know how to give a "critique". " I like it" ... that's all you can pull out of your vast years of experience.?
I'm tired of talking to an empty wall, tried to be polite, I've got other music to write. nite nite
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Ok apparently you don't know how to give a "critique". " I like it" ... that's all you can pull out of your vast years of experience.?
I'm tired of talking to an empty wall, tried to be polite, I've got other music to write. nite nite its written well , You have publishers to please not me You know how combative it is , Its a good song. Try him , I've never been ripped off . I'm not sure what trends are happening on current radio , Talk to him , he'll know https://www.masondouglasmusic.com
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