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Holly
by Ken Randall - 12/01/25 02:21 AM
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It’s All About Dollars & Cents (Neil Cotton) http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=12683404The time has come we should move on cause love no longer is in our hearts Living together isn’t what we want But we can’t afford to live apart We just live together It’s not what we’d rather It’s all dollars and cents We’re no longer lovers It’s a practical matter It’s all about dollars and cents I work 5 nights every week, We pass at the door cause you work days When I’m awake you are fast asleep We’re now more different than the same We just live together It’s not what we’d rather It’s dollars and cents We’re no longer lovers It’s a practical matter It’s all about dollars and cents We can share the kitchen and facilities Cause no one’s there when we have the need We moved in ‘cause we believed in our love But these mixed up lives have messed that up We just live together It’s not what we’d rather It’s dollars and cents We’re no longer lovers It’s a practical matter It’s all about dollars and cents.
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I like this, Neil. Just a couple of things I would do differently. I wouldn't use the title in the third line of the chorus. And I don't love the word "facilities". Other than that, it's cool
Bill
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Good intro Neil and a good all round song.
Best of luck with it
Travis
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
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Bill I see what you are going for...I went for repetion but I could achieve that by doubling the hook.
Facilities, utilities. flipped a coin LOL
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Thanks Travis. I am satisfied for now with it.
Nothing in stone.
Last edited by Neil Cotton; 02/13/14 02:47 PM.
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I believe Neil passed he was member elsewhere to.
One of the nicest guys.
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Yeah', Neil was the "good humor" man... Always enjoyed his comments.
DON'T WASTE YOUR TIME HERE... CANCEL CULTURE IS ALIVE AND WELL @JPF!
YOU'LL NEVER KNOW WHAT'S ALREADY BEEN DELETED...
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Hey Neil.............. not sure I wanna sing along to this in my car.. LOL And if you wrote it about me, I'd be pissed. hahah
"It Mattered to THAT One"
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I believe Neil is deceased.
One of the classiest members we've had here
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I"m very sad to hear that. He commented on my songs alot and was a great guy!
"It Mattered to THAT One"
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Neil isn't listed as deceased on JPF yet. Until then, I'll consider him alive and writing. John 
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So sorry to hear Fde. Brian will have to catch up with the deceased. John
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Yeah somebody mentioned it while backthat surely confirms it4
Good man was never here fir the bullshit just wanted to talk song
Not surprised to see how well respected he was
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