Wow, I read the lyrics first and for some reason heard a snappy tune in my head. After listening, I was surprised to hear a ballad.....I like how it moves chordally and the hook is so close I can taste it, a trim and a tweak ........pow.....a little piece of gold. This really has the potential to take off.....nicely done.

By the way, I don't personally think the term "record" is outdated.....45?, yes......heh.....two cents.