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Leafs
by Gary E. Andrews - 05/01/24 01:05 PM
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Neat idea for a song Tammy. I'd like hearing this song with a dominate yet tender piano track with acoustic picking support, a little bass to warm it up, very little if any percussion. This would also allow your voice to be showcased better. Nice write, really cool subject.
Experiment with the last line of the bridge a bit by either cutting off the word "long" a little sooner, with just three syllables ( "lo----o--ong." ) If you feel you need four, then hold the last with more of a fade and let the music take over there. Just some 1st impression ideas to consider, the song has potential. Nice job, nice write.
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