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Tam...like I said in my email...loved the verse chording and melody and the hook but that forced chord going into the chorus has got to go. You have to get away from that. It's becoming a not-so-pleasant signature for you. Even the bridge seems familiar.
Thought the chorus could have used a minor or 2 for tension...it would have accented the watlzy feel of this, which I do like.
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