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by Gary E. Andrews - 04/22/25 06:35 PM
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https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=14653518 I’ve got opinions Nobody listens Words and music in my brain Driving me insane I can’t write a song It just feels wrong It’s time I sold my guitar And bought a dog I’m losing my hair But I don’t care My fat ass online I can bitch anywhere I’m going blind AI twisting my mind Sittin’ in the dark all day Blogging my life away
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nice guitar fills
It’s time I sold my guitar
And bought a dog
LMAO with these lines
Steve
Creators of music have a responsibility to their craft. When they have finished using all the notes and words, they must pass them down to the next generation with a simple request. “Use these to create new music.”...Steven McDonald
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My fat ass online
I can bitch anywhere
--remove the pronoun " I " from the line and the line becomes much richer...
Last edited by Michael Zaneski; 09/12/23 10:14 PM.
Fate doesn't hang on a wrong or right choice
Fortune depends on the tone of your voice
-The Divine Comedy (Neil Hannon)
from the song "Songs of Love"
from the album "Casanova" (1996)
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I really tried my best to "channel" Dom lol... From the very basic Rock-n-Roll guitars to the relentless search for online notoriety... I hope he likes it. Perhaps he'll write a chorus? 
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Hey JAPOV (Tony)
This song would be fine for Mick Jagger and The Rolling Stones.
Very good!
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Ha! That was certainly the inspiration Thanx, Guy
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Look, I don't need to be on here. I'm about to be a MILLIONAIRE. I finally hit it BIG.
I combined Michael Crichton with Gene Roddenberry and wrote the screenplay for..
...JURASSIC GORN.
In theaters everywhere, summer 2025.
So, listen to me.
Scrap the lyric, (whose Dom?), keep the backing, and put something with a hook over it. You'd have a real song.
I must have something, somewhere you could use...
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Lol... Come'on Grouch, We need to figure out a way to get Dom involved in "SONGWRITING"! "Stones and Springsteen" style tracks are easy
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This is about FD. I didn't realize his name was "Dom".
I found something.
Something unspeakably old. Really simple. Post your email address here and I'll send it from Taxi. I'll bet you could toss it together in an hour.
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You know, I'm probably going to screw with the lyrics... lol Check your PM Or... Just post it!
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I don't have access to my home PC like I did way back when, and I don't know how to copy and paste on my phone.
You can post it here if you want. You may want to delete the chorus section. It might hurt the flow. Or shorten lines. It has a sturdy structure.
Ps...you might wanna delete "nekkid". I wouldn't use that now. Or leave it, it's not that offensive.
I sent it. I hope it doesn't come through all messed up, like when the Enterprise's transporter malfunctions...
Last edited by couchgrouch; 09/13/23 04:50 PM.
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Double tap on your phone and select copy, lol...
I'm not posting my Email publicly...
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Doesn't work on Taxi.
I've got 1000s of lyrics and they're often hard to find. Taxi makes it really easy to send people lyrics.
I don't blame you. I sent it. Post it here if you want.
Last edited by couchgrouch; 09/13/23 04:54 PM.
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Did you check your PM?
It's a real easy Email address...
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^^^^ Bump
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