I like this a lot. I think modern country is not the right pigeonhole for it - although Kenny Chesney or Zac Brown might like it. More like trop rock to my ear.

You have some good suggestions above about tightening it up. It is worth making each line count lyrically. I would not change the structure or music much.

Good one........


Colin

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