Hey Moke:

Love the vibe on this - very cool! And love the way the hook hits too.

You've already gotten some great critiques - nothing I can really add. I think if you work on the lines people have highlighted, it'll come together really nice. I'll also say that, like Zeek, it felt more like R&B to me.

LOL - wish my final versions sounded as good as your work tapes grin

Scott