Starts off like a Little Feat tune and the chorus crosses over into the The Band type feel. Pretty good company in my opinion.

It really does have a Little Feat vibe, so you might need to cut down the number of words in the verses, so you can let the natural funkiness come out some more.

I thought the pre-chorus didn't contribute too much to the song, might want to work on the melody/arrangement for that part. Chorus was pretty dang good!

Kevin


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