Mike, So I got Huey Lewis and the News ? Nice drivin' tune built for fun !! I'll agree with Kevin on cutting down some of the verses. Your definately rushin' it @ the first verse. This intro verse needs some work (for me). Its a bit confusing if your are just listening to it. Totally love the title, the refrain @ "She's a beautiful thang"... was unexpected and cool. I suppose this is what ya'll are calling a PreChorus ? I dug it as a musician. Super chorus and structure for its target IMO. Also, and this is huge...."Gonna need a lifeLine" really sticks in your head !! I say tighten up verse one and condense the other verses and this thing goes ballistic !!! Keep rockin Man !!