Hi Mike,

First I didn’t mean to imply that you aren’t a pro!! I’m so sorry if it sounded that way, lol. I was so surprised that you said the same thing as one of the coaches at Songu. I don’t usually get attached to my lyrics anymore but with this one I was. I was too close to it to see what was wrong. When you said “relatable” the light switch came on… I’m usually judging my lyrics that way, trying to make them relatable, but everything I thought I’d learned went out the window with this one. The one coach saying “I wouldn’t change a thing lyrically” confirmed to me that the other coach didn’t know what they were talking about, lol. So you can imagine my surprise when the same coach started suggesting changes!

Anyway thanks to you I can now see where the problem lies…I’ve already rewritten the chorus and Terry is doing a quick audio as I’m typing. He has been so patient with me on this one; I can’t even count the mp3s!!! I am sure glad I posted this song, thank you so much you have no idea how much you’ve helped! smile

PS
Please feel free to (as you say) invade my post anytime anything that comes out of it will be good!

Dottie