Dottie, Darn good lyric writing! The story is an old one - a man who's run out of patience and is leaving a cheating lover in the morning - but you bring out the weariness and pained acceptance of what must be done as the singer slips out of town without so much as goodbye or fare-thee-well. Instead of a mere recital of the facts, or a feeling sorry-for-yourself song, you get to the psychological core of the matter. Painful as it may be, sometime the only way out is the door.

Real good piece of lyric writing.


Write from your heart, not what you think others want to hear.

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