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Bayside
by Gary E. Andrews - 10/19/26 09:48 PM
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This is a collab with Terry Morris; it's been through a LOT of changes musically and lyrically!! I think we've sent it in for at least 5 pro crits so far and we are getting close to the demo stage. I would love to have your opinions on all aspects of the song and lyric before we demo it. This is just a work tape, Terry has some really cool licks in some of the takes but this is just an acoustic version. Thanks!! http://www.soundclick.com/player/single_player.cfm?q=hi&songID=10551124Beneath Alibis Dottie Corley & Terry Morris © 2011 V1 When the moon hangs over the bayou Before sunlight tastes the dew I'll be leavin' Mississippi But I won’t forget about you Pre-chorus You’ll wake up in the morning At the dead end of my dreams Chorus Beneath alibis Between love and leaving Between you do and you don’t Your smiles put out My fearful doubt Until I realized The truth you were hiding Beneath alibis V2 While your sipping morning coffee Set your pretty head at ease When starlight greets the skyline I'll be in Texas and you’ll be free Pre-chorus I’m not saying I won’t miss you But I finally faced the truth Chorus Bridge Your love turned into cheating My faith turned into doubt Somehow you turned into someone I’m better off without Chorus Tag Beneath alibis
Last edited by Dottie; 04/21/11 08:36 PM.
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